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Post  daheff on Mon Jan 31, 2011 8:44 am

Hi

I know this will change based on the unseen....but how would this be for an introduction based off the preseen? Should anything be added /removed?

1.0 Introduction

BeeZed Constrution Services( BZCS) is a subsidiary of BeeZed which is a construction and property management company listed on a European stock exchange. BZCS is an international construction services company that has projects in 6 divisions; Office buildings, Sports Facilities, Environmental projects, Infrastructure, Community projects and Energy projects. BZCS is operating in a market that has had declined by 10% since 2008, and that is forecast by EuroConstruct to decline by 0.1% in 2011 but increase from 2012 by 2.5%
BZCS has recently restructured its operations to become more competitive in tendering on construction projects. There is an OFT investigation into “bid-rigging” in the industry. BZCS has advised the OFT of its discussions with other companies on a UK hospital construction contract in the hope of lenient treatment

BZCS has one of the best Health and Safety records in its field. BZCS is committed to enhancing the culture of safety throughout its company and suppliers, so much so that it has replaced suppliers that did not meet its criteria.

BZCS is committed to reducing the amount of waste it produces that goes to landfill. In 2010 it recycled or disposed of 62% of its waste from its construction sites.
A full summary of the businesses current position can be found in the SWOT analysis in Appendix 1

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Too long introduction

Post  Moderator1 on Mon Jan 31, 2011 8:12 pm

Really admire your introduction! And it is too long! We can reduce it, am happy to see 1 diversity mark in it! Very Happy
Your introduction should be brief, because you will run out of time. I have removed some parts of it and modified!

BeeZed Constrution Services( BZCS) is a subsidiary of BeeZed which is a construction and property management company listed on a European stock exchange. BZCS experienced a rise in profit up to 2.3% and is operating in a market that has had declined by 10% since 2008, and that is forecast by EuroConstruct to decline by 0.1% in 2011 but increase from 2012 by 2.5%.

Above is a good introduction. Try to add 1 diversity example, mention about 2-3 key competitors (major ones). It would give 1 more diversity mark!



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Re: Report introduction

Post  daheff on Tue Feb 01, 2011 7:17 am

Great

thanks for this

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